erm. i have no 'advanced critique' to offer. but i guess you could add a tad more lighting here and there, just for the sake of lighting. i didn't have to stare or anything to actually understand it... i've been really wanting to paint something sorta like this... trees anyway.
I like it because of the way the moon silhouettes the spooky looking tree, but my biggest problem with the pic is its way too dark.
I hard to stare real good to understand that it was a hang man dangling off the tree. 2 reasons I had to stare hard was 1. Because it’s too dark to see anything else outside the moon and 2. It’s an abstract human which isn’t too much of a problem it just takes a second to understand that is isn’t a traditional shape..
If i was going to improve this id say add some lighting in here a little, maybe a glow from where the moon hits the hangman’s body and a little lighting on the tops of graves.
I don’t mean to sound like I’m a moaning ****** but you opted for criticism and that has to be my only problem with your work.
Apart from that I like it; it’s got that spooky October feeling.
cool idea! neato!
I hard to stare real good to understand that it was a hang man dangling off the tree. 2 reasons I had to stare hard was 1. Because it’s too dark to see anything else outside the moon and 2. It’s an abstract human which isn’t too much of a problem it just takes a second to understand that is isn’t a traditional shape..
If i was going to improve this id say add some lighting in here a little, maybe a glow from where the moon hits the hangman’s body and a little lighting on the tops of graves.
I don’t mean to sound like I’m a moaning ****** but you opted for criticism and that has to be my only problem with your work.
Apart from that I like it; it’s got that spooky October feeling.